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Cover reveal: Russian Revival

Wow!

I have a cover for Russian Revival and it’s amazing! Many thanks go to Drew Robinson of Spork Design for taking on this project. He’s a wonderful artist. Yes, he drew the cover; the image is a charcoal pencil drawing.

And I have an updated cover blurb for the book, too. Let’s hope it doesn’t go through too many more revisions before it does the job.

My testimony put my lover behind bars.

WITSEC took me into protective custody. Once a celebrated concert violinist, I gave up everything. I’ve moved and changed my identity five times in the past eight years to stay safe. Now I’m trying to build a small business in landscaping.

Now Carlos is free and he wants revenge. He’s got an entire cartel to make sure he gets it.

WITSEC has abandoned me, and I have to hide and change my name one more time. Ciro Mancini, the new capo of southern Tennessee, offers me his name, his protection, and the possibility of resuming my concert career.

Mafia protection comes with strings attached, and Ciro’s support puts him in danger, too. I desperately want that career in music, but perhaps landscaping is safer for the both of us.

Have I just jumped from the frying pan into the fire?

Russian Revival, the fifth book in my Russian Love series, will be available for pre-order soon. Stay tuned!

Better late than never: Progress report

Although client work has been light this week, I’ve been working hard on the next book due for publication: Russian Revival. It’s in my editor’s hands now. I look forward to seeing what she does with the manuscript, because her insights and comments help me produce a better story each and every time.

I hired a cover artist for Russian Revival. We’re going in a bit of a different direction. Yes, the cover art will still align with genre expectations, but I don’t want the cover art to be lost amid a sea of similar covers. So … we’re going with actual art, not just a stock photo with the author’s name and the book’s title slapped over it. The cover artist, Drew Robinson of Spork Design, has produced the most lovely charcoal drawing. In his words, “I’m really lik[ing] the texture and composition and texture on this. It accentuates her innocence and his shadowy past.”

Once the cover is finalized, Drew will create the cover art for the rest of the series. I look forward to seeing what he’ll produce. By the way, the cover art absolutely blows my budget out of the water, but I believe the results will be totally worth the extra expense. (And if you’re looking for a dynamite cover artist, I cannot recommend anyone more highly!)

I’ve drafted a new cover blurb: you know, that sales copy that goes on the back cover of the book. Amazon calls it a book description. The blurb is now in the hands of a publicist to revise or rewrite. She also has a synopsis of the book, because you can’t write a cover blurb without knowing what happens in the book.

Russian Revival is due for release on January 15, 2023. Stay tuned!

Next in the queue is the sequel to Triple Burn. In this book, I introduce a new alien species, the Ahn’hudi. I envision them as a venomous, ophidian-like race. (Is ophidian a new word for you? Look it up!) As per the sub-genre’s tropes, the heroes (the plural is deliberate) are dominant types who coddle their mate—regardless of whether she wants to be coddled. It’s up to her to establish herself as competent adult with her own thoughts and opinions. That’s where the conflict comes in. Everybody loses something important, but the trick is to make what they gain worth that loss. (Yes, like Triple Burn, it’s a polyamorous romance. If that’s not your thing, try something else.)

This manuscript has been somewhat problematic for me, because the characters are determined to write themselves into a deep dark hole. I have decided not to rescue them by deleting a large portion of the story and rewriting it so that it progresses as I intended. What I am going to do is let them dig that hole and continue digging, but I’ll redirect them so that the hole becomes a tunnel which, at the end of the book, will erupt from the side of the mountain into daylight. Redemption and the truism that life has no do-overs are running themes throughout many of my books; this will be no different.

I hope to release this book in early March 2023. I still don’t have a good title for it, but am thinking of Doubleheader, Double Play, or Douple Dip. I want to stick with the first book’s titling terminology (except double instead of triple, second word up for grabs). If you have a suggestion for an M/F/M alien romance, feel free to contribute. If I use it, you’ll get the credit for it. 

Finally, I hope to have Champion of the Twin Moons ready for release by midsummer. This book will be a good deal longer than either Russian Revival or Double-whatever.

After a 2-year hiatus, I need to be productive again.

Headed down the homestretch

After finishing Knight of the Twin Moons (book #4 in the Twin Moons Saga), I started three new manuscripts:

  1. A sequel to Triple Burn.
  2. A fifth book in the Twin Moons Saga.
  3. A fifth book in the Russian Love series.

I’ve only got one chapter—maybe two—to go on the third manuscript which will be titled Russian Revival.

Working Book Blurb
Here’s a quick summary of the story. This is where I’m starting with the back cover blurb:

Former concert violinist Evelina lives under WITSEC protection because her testimony sent ex-boyfriend Carlos Farillo. Carlos wants revenge. Getting out of prision early gives him that opportunity sooner rather than later.

Inessa alerts her cousin to the danger and persuades her husband, Giovanni, to extend his protection. Giovanni dispatches his underboss, Ciro Mancini, to Cleveland, Tennessee with two assignments: expand the Maglione territory as the new capo of southern Tennessee and protect his wife’s cousin from the Farillo cartel. Shortly after arriving, Ciro realizes the cartel already knows where Evelina has been hiding and has been keeping an eye on her for Carlos.

Attracted to the pretty violinist, Ciro decides that changing her identity once again by giving her the Mancini name will not only help to conceal her but will also cement the Maglione mob’s protection over her. Not at all enthusiastic about the idea, Evelina agrees to his scheme after her apartment is invaded. And off they go to Las Vegas for a quick wedding.

The journey to Las Vegas puts Ciro in another mob boss’ territory. That boss happens to be the father of Lorenzo Iscarus, a world renowned concert pianist. Lorenzo’s father entertains ideas of having musical prodigies for grandchildren, which puts Ciro in danger and compounds Evelina’s peril, assuming Lorenzo falls in line with his father’s aspirations.

Evelina wavers between wanting to return to the stage and wanting to return to the relative obscurity of being a landscaper. She soon finds herself depending upon her husband and succumbs to her attraction to him. Ciro struggles with protecting the wife with whom he’s quickly falling in love, saving his own skin, and building a business to expand his boss’ empire.

Will they neutralize the threats against them without igniting a mob war?

The Process of Publishing
Writing the book is only completion of the first big step in the publishing process. Once I get that last chapter (or two) drafted, I go back to the beginning. I’ll review the manuscript, self-edit, “machine” edit, and revise. Then the document will go off to my wonderful editor, Cindy Draughon.

When she has finished editing the manuscript, it’s back to the beginning to address her recommended changes. That’s something a lot of people don’t realize: the editor suggests changes. Nothing the editor does is set in stone; however, since I’m paying for her professional expertise, I’d be remiss in not giving every suggestion thorough consideration. I generally accept anywhere between 75 to 95 percent of her changes. I truly appreciate her insight when she points out where my plot drops the proverbial ball or when what I’ve written makes no sense. I ask for candor: “Don’t worry about hurting my feelings. Let’s get this right.”

In the meantime, I’ll be getting a front cover professionally designed. With this book, I will likely have new covers for the entire series done, budget willing.

Of course, there’s formatting: the interior pages of the book have to look good and read well, too. And, last but not least, there’s marketing. Expect to see a lot more promotion of this book in the coming weeks. I will, of course, announce here, on Facebook, on LinkedIn, and on Twitter when it goes up for pre-order. The pre-order price will be discounted, so take advantage of that opportunity while you can!

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Image by Paul Kehrer from Chicago, USA on Wikimedia.

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