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Sometimes, the best ideas don’t stick

While finishing the draft for Hogtied, an idea for a sequel emerged from the depths of my imagination and swam just beneath the surface, shark fin poking through to announce the presence of another story. Some of my best books began like that.

By “best books,” I don’t necessarily mean those that sold the most copies or received the most reviews. I mean the books I enjoyed writing the most: the stories I liked best.

The sequel to Hogtied isn’t shaping up like that. It began with a bang, strong and loud in my brain. I knew the main characters and where they were going. As usual, I just wasn’t sure how they’d get there. They must have taken a detour, because the story has been difficult to corral and guide and just write. I initially expected to be ready to publish this as-yet untitled sequel by the end of August. That, my dears, ain’t gonna happen. Then I delayed release until the end of September. That probably won’t happen either, but I’ll work on it.

It would be helpful to know which of my books readers liked best. That would at least give me an idea as to whether the ones I found easiest to write are also the ones readers prefer. Does level of difficulty equate to reader preference? That would be interesting to know. Whether such knowledge would change what I do or how I do it is entirely beside the point. Sometimes, satisfaction of curiosity is its own goal.

In the meantime, I’ve got yet another idea shark circling in the depths of my imagination. It’s a new story, not intended as a series starter; but then, none of them ever are. It returns me to the paranormal romance sub-genre where I really like to play. It also involves a literary device that I strongly dislike: time travel. That aspect occurs only once and in the beginning of the story, but I dislike it all the same. Unfortunately, I can’t figure out a way to make the story work without it.

Before I started scheduling (more or less) production of books, I’d table an idea if it didn’t inspire me. I’ve got scads of such story starters saved. Most will never be developed. Focus was actually one of them and I think it turned out pretty well. Of course, I had a running story in my head for years that I started writing and quickly shelved. I may yet return to it. Writing such a long-running story in which I starred as the protagonist removes me from that lead role. Oh, the heroine will still imbue aspects of my personality, but she will no longer be me. I think there’s a part of myself that dislikes relinquishing the association, to make the heroine someone other than yours truly.

That’s a hazard, I suppose, of being an undisciplined “pantser.” We can’t plan a story for love or money.

5 Star Review Focus by Holly Bargo

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nProfessional photographer Dana Secrest has a secret and doesn’t even know it. When she storms from her best friend’s home on Christmas Eve—not the wisest decision she’s ever made—security contractor Sam Galdicar follows her to save her from her own hot temper and impulsive action. Upon arriving home, Dana discovers her apartment has been ransacked. Then an attempt is made on her life. She doesn’t know who’s trying to kill her or why, but Sam is determined to protect the woman whose eyes don’t need a camera to see the truth.
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nThis enemies-to-lovers, billionaire romance contains some explicit content that may be unsuitable for readers under 18 years old.n

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n​“Dana, where in the hell do you think you’re going?” 
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n“I’m going home.”
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n“You live eight miles across town,” he pointed out.
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n“So, go back home if you’re too weak to walk,” I sneered and wished I’d either not forgotten my purse and camera case or that I’d worn footwear more appropriate to an evening hike across the city in winter. My feet in their kidskin ballet flats and nylon tights were freezing. I would have preferred a ride in a warm taxi.
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nHe grabbed my arm again. I spun around on a patch of ice and clutched at him to keep from falling. Sam steadied me and I slapped at his arm.
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n“It’ll take you four hours to get home if you don’t freeze to death by then or wind up a crime victim,” he pointed out.
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nI slapped his arm again. That time he released me.
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n“Look, dickwad—” city living had really downgraded my vocabulary, another reason to move back to a rural village where manners tended toward that famed Midwestern civility “—if you want to escort me, I can’t stop you. But I am not going back there.”
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nSam sighed. I started walking again, albeit a little more carefully due to the icy patches on the sidewalk. He fell into step beside me. I pulled up the collar of my wool coat and hunched my shoulders, shoving my hands as deeply as possible in the pockets. Damn, I should have worn gloves. And lined woolen pants with wool socks and boots. And a hat. Oh, hell, I shouldn’t have stormed out of there without my belongings.
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nHe held his silence for the next umpteen blocks, for which I told myself I was grateful. My breath puffed in white clouds as I hurried, despite knowing that a steady pace would have been more prudent to cover the distance. The temperature sank like a stone and I shivered as I walked. Although I clenched my jaw, I couldn’t help the chatter of my teeth. A taxi rolled by, its wheels crunching on dirty snow and ice.
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n“Dana, you’re freezing,” he declared.
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n“I know,” I managed without stuttering.
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n“You’ve got to stop and warm up.”
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nCasting him a quick glance of intense dislike, I said, “Unless you’ve got a hot bath, a warm bed, a hot meal, and a fresh change of clothes tucked away in your pocket, I’ve got to keep going.”
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nA few steps more and his hand again clamped around my arm and yanked me to a stop.
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n“This is getting old,” I grumbled.
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nHe pulled a key from his pocket and smiled at me. “Everything you demanded is right here.”
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n“What?” Apparently, the cold had turned my brain into icy slush.
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n“I live three blocks over. You’re coming home with me.”
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n“No.”
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nHe grinned at me. I wanted to swat that grin off his face, but shivered too violently for decent aim. Of course, I told myself, his height—fully a foot taller than mine—had nothing to do with it.
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n“Bath, bed, food, and clothes are just three blocks over. Now keep your word.”
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Russian Pride by Holly Bargo #MFRWhooks

August Book Of The Month 
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Russian Pride 
n (Russian Love Book 4) 
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n​Rescued from domestic abuse, Bratva princess Inessa recuperates from the latest beating in the home of Giovanni Maglione, the mafia captain of Cleveland. Learning that her husband double-crossed the Chinese triad, and they want their pound of flesh–and they’re happy to take it out of Inessa–her parents ask Giovanni to marry their newly widowed daughter. The Chinese triad will be looking for a Russian mobster’s wife, not the wife of an Italian mobster. Inessa agrees to this marriage of convenience which, of course, isn’t so convenient. The ruse fails, which forces Giovanni into a violent and bloody mob war, because he protects what’s his… and Inessa is most definitely his.n

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nInessa whimpered, cowered in a corner, and tried to protect her head from the blows raining down on her.
nYebanaya suka!” Ruslan shouted as he switched from using his fists to kicking her with his booted feet. He preferred pointy-toed cowboy boots.
nInessa moaned as she felt another rib give way, the crack inaudible beneath the thud of his boot against her side and his bellowed curses.
n“Cheat on me, will you? You dare to sleep with another man?” he yelled in Russian. “Fucking bitch! No man will want to touch you after I’m through with you!”
nShe groaned again, her voice hoarse and no singular pain distinguishable from another among the contusions and broken bones resulting from yet another perceived infraction of Ruslan’s many rules. She should have known better than to smile when thanking the nice young man for helping to carry and then load the groceries into the car. But it had been so nice to have someone do something for her just that once, especially since she hadn’t quite healed from the last beating.
nInessa felt the blackness of oblivion cloud her mind. She welcomed it and hoped it would stay.
n“It’s your damned fault that I can’t pay my debts!” Ruslan screamed at her, the words landing on the edge of her fading consciousness.
nWith an incongruous sound, the doorbell rang. Ruslan set his booted foot back on the floor and muttered, “Stay put.”
nHe turned and walked through the house to answer the door. Chest heaving, body sweating, and red-faced with the exertion of pummeling his wife, he flung open the door and gaped. Whipcord lean and sharp-featured, Gennady faced him. The man’s eagle-eyed gaze flickered over him, missing nothing.
n“What are you doing in Seattle, Gennady?” Ruslan demanded as he positioned his body to block the man’s entry.
n“Maksim and Olivia haven’t heard from Inessa lately and they sent me to check up on her.” Gennady caught sight of the swollen and abraded knuckles on the other man’s hands, the dark, shiny liquid splattered on his black, alligator hide boots.
n“She’s fine,” Ruslan answered curtly. “Now go.”
nGennady raised an eyebrow and managed to look down his nose at the bigger man. “I don’t think so. Step aside, Ruslan.”
n“What? You don’t trust my word?”
nGennady’s expression turned from skepticism to open contempt. “You’re a worthless shit, Ruslan. You always have been.  So, no, I don’t trust your word. Now, step aside.”
nRuslan puffed himself in an attempt to intimidate his father’s man-of-all-work. Faster than his eye could follow, Gennady pulled out a knife and dug the tip of it into the soft bulge of his belly.
n“Step aside, Ruslan,” Gennady ordered. “I won’t ask again.”
nRuslan raised his hands, palms open and outward, and stepped back. He pointed in the opposite direction of the kitchen and said, “Inessa’s out.”
n“I’ll just check around,” Gennady said as he stepped through the doorway and closed the door behind him with a quiet click. In his peripheral vision, he saw Ruslan gather his courage and coil his body. “Don’t try anything stupid.”
n“You invade my house, you pipsqueak,” Ruslan blustered.
n“Maksim’s house,” Gennady corrected as he walked in the direction of the bedrooms. “He paid for it and he holds the deed.”
n“But I live here.”
nGennady pushed open a door and peered inside. Gleaming and, he suspected, disused exercise equipment filled the room. He walked to the next room and looked into another spotless room devoid of personality, with just a few knickknacks on the shelves. A guest bedroom, he supposed. He proceeded to the third bedroom and wrinkled his nose at the lingering smell of Ruslan emanating from it. Although the room appeared clean, a miasma of despair hung in the air.
n“See? The bitch is gone,” Ruslan snapped. “Now get out.”
nLosing his patience with the boor, Gennady’s other hand snapped out and struck Ruslan in the throat. With a gasp and a wheeze, the big man dropped to his knees and clutched his throat. Gennady set the razor edge of his knife to Ruslan’s sweaty neck and said, “Shut up.”
nRuslan nodded as the hot smell of urine filled the air. Gennady nearly smiled at the rapidly spreading stain on the bully’s jeans. Straightening, he walked with purpose toward the other side of the house and peered into the kitchen. Dark, wet spatters caught his notice. Muttering an oath, he rushed into the room and gurgled with horror at the bloody bit of hamburger, hair, and fabric that lay curled up and insensible on the tile floor. He reached out to touch the woman. The skin was still warm. He found her arm and followed its line to her wrist, which was obviously broken. Swallowing a bellow of rage and horror, he extended two fingers and pressed them to what he hoped was the pulse point of her neck. Nothing. He slid his fingers around the bloody mess of her until the sensitive fingertips found the right spot. He sighed. Though her heartbeat was rapid and weak, Inessa still lived.
nGennady drew back his hand and pulled his cell phone from his pocket and dialed 911. When assured that an ambulance was on its way, he went back to deal with Ruslan.
nRuslan had fled.
nGennady cursed. He returned to squat beside Inessa and found her other hand. He held her limp hand in his, hoping to impart some small measure of warmth and caring to the young woman he’d always regarded as an innocent little sister to be protected from depraved men like himself and bullies like Ruslan. Suddenly, the sight of a woman’s bruised and broken body nauseated him. Releasing Inessa’s hand, he lurched to the scrupulously clean bathroom and vomited. Gennady vowed to be more gentle with his beloved Suzanne when he returned to Cleveland. She’d given him her trust and he would not abuse it.
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