Hens Lay Eggs
food for thought
“Sanctuary,” I murmured, #MFRWhooks
Focus by Holly Bargo
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nProfessional photographer Dana Secrest has a secret and doesn’t even know it. When she storms from her best friend’s home on Christmas Eve—not the wisest decision she’s ever made—security contractor Sam Galdicar follows her to save her from her own hot temper and impulsive action. Upon arriving home, Dana discovers her apartment has been ransacked. Then an attempt is made on her life. She doesn’t know who’s trying to kill her or why, but Sam is determined to protect the woman whose eyes don’t need a camera to see the truth. n n |
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n“Sanctuary,” I murmured, knowing that while many churches still practiced sanctuary, it held no legal force.
nSuzanne Blankenship, pastor’s wife and southern transplant, responded with a wide smile and an invitation to join her in the kitchen.
n“Why, I remember when I was pregnant with my fourth child. Nothing but tomato juice would curb my nausea. Today, I can’t tolerate the taste!” she babbled as she led me back through the church and into the adjoining parsonage.
nI wondered how long Gordon would wait before he started searching for me. I wondered how persistent he would be before dragging me back to Bradley.
nSuzanne sat me down in her cozy kitchen and poured me a glass of milk. “Y’all need calcium.”
nI found my finger again running underneath the edge of the collar.
n“You want me to unfasten that vile thing?”
nI nodded, unable to speak, unable to bring myself to remove it. She moved behind me and her warm fingers quickly unfastened the clasp that my clumsy fingers dared not touch. Bradley allowed me to put on a collar to coordinate with my outfits, but never allowed me to take one off. Suzanne dropped the collar on the table.
n“Would you like to talk about it, woman to woman?”
nI opened my mouth, but the words wouldn’t come. A door slammed open and I flinched. Heavy footsteps resounded on the wooden floors until they stopped on the kitchen tile. Gordon’s gaze flickered to the collar lying on the table.
n“Mrs. Vermont, you’re to come with me.”
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Too many choices
One of the reasons I scoff at prospective clients who offer me a percentage of royalties to develop their ideas into full-fledged novels is that ideas are plentiful and free. Developing them into something fit for public consumption takes time, effort, and skill. It’s hard work. Not physically difficult, mentally difficult.
I don’t exactly build muscle sitting at my computer tap-tap-tapping on the keyboard.
If the “experts” are right, there are only a small number of overarching plots anyway. Every story is based on one of those archetypes. So, the prospective client’s idea isn’t exactly original or valuable. There’s no gold in that hill. The value of an idea comes from the skill with which it’s developed. The sheer, overwhelming number of titles available on Amazon should indicate that authors certainly don’t lack for ideas to develop.
I don’t believe in writer’s block either: that mental stoppage of creativity. Sure, a writer might reach an obstacle in the story beyond which he cannot figure out how to maneuver his characters around or through. In that case, some distance may be just what the doctor ordered. Let the plot crisis percolate in the subconscious and a solution will likely float to the top. Or delete, delete, delete until you can redirect the character’s path and avoid writing him into an oubliette. Another option is to abandon the manuscript. Perhaps it’s given you all it can, and now it’s time to move on to bigger and better things. Or at least something else.
I do suffer from writing stoppages. Those hiatuses occur because of mental or creative exhaustion. This usually happens after I finish a book and may last up to several weeks. (If I’m really stressed, the hiatus may last years.) My mind feels drained. It needs to rest and recharge. That may include reading books, watching television, spending time with the animals, going shopping or on other excursions, etc. I tend to sleep more during these periods, letting my subconscious play as it dredges up old weirdness and lingering emotions in dreams.
During such a hiatus, I may work a little here and a little there on any one of the two dozen or more manuscripts that I’ve started and will probably never finish. Some of them were basically brain farts, temporary explosions of limited creativity that eased as soon as I wrote them down. That’s one way of knowing whether a story idea is any good. If I can’t keep it going, then it wasn’t meant to go anywhere, good intentions notwithstanding. Either the story bored me or it quickly tipped beyond even my generous limits of absurdity. Regardless, if it’s not worth my time or mental effort to develop, then it’s certainly not worth a reader’s attention.
That said, I have lots and lots of ideas for stories. Occasionally when I feel restless with the urge to write but I don’t quite know what I want to write, I’ll go back to those old files and sift through them, hoping to find one or two that spark my interest. I have many from which to choose, too many. Sometimes I’ll put in a few paragraphs or a few pages. Sometimes not. I do have several manuscripts started that I want to finish. I don’t know that will ever happen, but I have good intentions.
And you know where good intentions lead.
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Focus by Holly Bargo
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nProfessional photographer Dana Secrest has a secret and doesn’t even know it. When she storms from her best friend’s home on Christmas Eve—not the wisest decision she’s ever made—security contractor Sam Galdicar follows her to save her from her own hot temper and impulsive action. Upon arriving home, Dana discovers her apartment has been ransacked. Then an attempt is made on her life. She doesn’t know who’s trying to kill her or why, but Sam is determined to protect the woman whose eyes don’t need a camera to see the truth. n n Pre-Order
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nI continued to look around my ruined apartment. My laptop computer was gone, which really made me angry. I heaved a sigh of relief remembering that all my client information and photos had been saved to the cloud. I wept over the ruined negatives in my dark room, the photos that would never be developed, the ones which had been developed and now lay in torn shreds on the floor amid a toxic slurry of photo developing chemicals. I ignored Sam’s murmured comment that he hadn’t thought anyone used real film anymore, much less developed it. My bathroom, too, suffered the same rage of destruction.
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nThe cops finally arrived. They took down my name, snapped pictures, asked a bunch of questions, and somehow managed to insinuate that the wreckage had been my fault. When they left, I buried my face in Sly’s soft fur and cried some more. The overwhelming task of cleaning the disaster defeated me.
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n“You’re coming home with me,” Sam said, settling a hand over my shoulder. “You can’t stay here.”
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nI sniffled. “What about Sly?”
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n“Walmart’s open today. We’ll stop there, pick up some clean clothes for you and some stuff for him. I expect you’ll be my guests for at least a week.”
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nI didn’t want to accept, but didn’t see any better alternative. With a shaky exhale, I accepted his generous offer, followed up by, “I’ve got to call Dad.”
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nHe nodded. I transferred Sly to his arms, which surprised them both. However, Sly endured it without grumbling, although I couldn’t say as much for Sam. I called my stepfather.
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n“Hey, Dad.”
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n“What is it, pumpkin?” The concern in his voice indicated to me that he knew right away something was wrong. My stepfather was a good man. “What’s wrong?”
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n“My … uh … my apartment was burglarized.” I took a deep breath and lost the fragile hold on my composure. “It’s ruined. Everything’s ruined!”
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n“Calm down, pumpkin,” he urged and gave me a moment to get myself back under control. “Are you alone?”
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n“N-no.”
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n“Then let me talk to whoever’s there with you.”
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nWordlessly, I handed the phone to Sam, exchanging the device for Sly.
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n“Sir,” Sam said and identified himself. They conducted a conversation in low tones and clipped syllables. It ended with Sam saying, “I’ll take care of her, sir.”
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n“Just … just a couple of days,” I mumbled, reluctant to impose upon his generosity more than I already had.
nHe focused his blue eyes on me and nodded. I didn’t make the mistake of thinking he agreed with me; I knew he merely acknowledged that I’d spoken. Arrogant man. n
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